If somebody volunteers to translate the VN I can add a TL, but if not then it won't happen. Translations are very expensive and I can't spend $1,000+ getting a free game translated.
SERIOUSLY. this is one of the cutest yet sappiest stories I have ever read asdskadhskjasadjdsdas. i legitimately got off my seat and started jumping around and whisper-screaming towards the end of the story and smiled so hard my mouth started hurting...
but anyways thanks to everyone who helped make this masterpiece, and ily haruto and akira <3
I really loved the story here!!!! And how Haruto's perspective was in the story. To have such a popular song out in the public turn out to be about you? It really fit both Haruto's and Akira's characters!! Not to mention, the dynamic that the two of them have is both so, so sweet, and super touching.
I really saw myself in Akira, and I'm so happy that they got their happily ever after. Also, I did take the time to read the notes - super interesting how the VN came to be, and the change in characters, too!
Thank you for making this; I hope we get to see more of them in the future!
You really, really, REALLY, should post the soundtrack to Spotify!!!! This is def something I'd wanna listen to on repeat while studying or mourning some book I've just finished reading!!!!!
i don't think i'll add more to this vn (and i want to keep it all ages) but maybe i can write a lil extra something and post it on ao3 i'll see how i feel
Oh my god this was the best one ive ever read yet. I love the concept i love their personalities especialy haruto's. This was such a good game i thought it was a bit boring at the start but im happy i stayed for longer because with every part of the story i played trough it just got more and more interesting you did such a great job i really love it!
Haruto and Akira are SO DAMN SO TENDER I'M CRYING. MY KIDS. I LOVE THEM. I LOVE THIS PIECE. Thank you very much😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 (Sorry if it's written incorrectly, I don't know English and I'm using a translator )
Finally got around to playing this, and loved it so much. I wanna complain about it being too short and wanting to see more, but it's so cute either way. I think you have another hit couple on your hands like Tavi and Yuel. Akira is so cute, and seeing him with tsundere Haru... It's perfectly adorable.
Absolutely loved 😭😭 Obsessed with the art and storyline but most importantly the soundtrack 👅👅 shit had me giggling biting my finger twirling my hair and kicking my feet when that one scene of Akira would show up while Intense Extance played in the background UGH
no but seriously now i'm stuck listening to it on loop SOSme when Akira showed up
I love you for that. Please never use ai or machine translations in your work, I respect that so much because I personally feel uncomfortable with the use of AI in projects.
You have instantly gained so much respect keep it up! I feel the same way about using ai in places that are meant to be creative it just takes away the passion from the work, never change :)
You can find all of my commercial VNs on Steam here, and all of my free VNs which aren't on Steam are here (though idk if you'll be able to view this since there's some r18 games mixed in).
I found it hard to get into this novel at first, I thought "this guy has way too many inner thoughts." but over time, it became endearing more than anything. I adored this experience greatly, both Haruto and Akira are such well written characters, i found myself somewhat attatched to them even without proper backstories that capitalize on truama, which was new for me as im usually only an angst consumer lolol (i lowkey greived the story this could've been when i read the notes that were unlocked after finishing the game..but i still thoroughly enjoyed the fluff.) I was also very satisfied with how the story went about, especially the ending. I also haven't related so much to a fictional character in such a long time..Haruto the man that you are. Overall, this was an amazing play that will always haunt my narrative. Not only was the story a work of art, but the art style itself was extremely satisfying, not to mention the soundtrack..I wonder if it's on spotify? Nevertheless, thank you Ebi for this wonderful game!! i plan on playing every other free vn you have to offer <3.
i like writing 1st person narrators with a lot of inner thoughts, i think it's fun... it makes them feel more realistic to me haha, but idk maybe other people don't think about 1001 things all the time like me
i am an angst enjoyer too, but my most angsty bl vn is this commercial one here... it made my proofreader cry multiple times lol so that was fun
if you want a more dour bl story from me that's free you can maybe check this one out, it's a bit of a mix of gloom and hope which was meant to feel ever so slightly seedy... this is an r18 story though and it deals w/ some potentially uncomfy subjects.
absolutely amazing marketing, advertising a paid game as your most angsty one..now i cant rest until i've cried over it atleast once. omw to make a friend buy it for me. meanwhile, im eager to check out the second one! thank you for the links x3
Got up to the bar scene and decided to comment bc I actually screeched out of cuteness overload!!! The music and visuals and Haruto's humour are just unmatched...can't wait to finish it!
I think this is the second BL VN I played from you and I really loved this one too! I related so much to Haruto as someone who had childhood dreams but ended up giving up on myself and is now a corporate slave. I also love rock music and recently got into vkei bands like Plastic Tree. You really made his character have distinct voice with his own flaws and sarcastic personality. Since this is a music focused VN, the soundtrack was really good and fitting. I loved the character design for Akira sprite he matched the rock aesthetic to a T. Overall, this was a great read and I also appreciate reading your notes after the game and seeing the creative process of putting the narrative together.
really late reply but thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it! i think the composer did a really great job on this project too, i love how the ost turned out!
and i'm IN LOVE with this game and your characters!!
And most certainly i want to see more content about them in the future, because I'm sure this story won't let me go for a long time.
I really wish more people knew about this MASTERPIECE😭😭😭😭😭😭
I can tell it was thoughtful and difficult work, and I can definitely say that a lot of effort was put into it, because I didn't just read this story, I felt it with my heart and soul.
I'm wondering. Is the music original? Like made just for the game...if not I'd love to listen to it, all of the songs, the one when your loading the game etc. They're just so good when I first heard it my jaw DROPPED DDD. It's just that good. And btw props to whoever thought of the character designs they're stunning!!!
GUH I MADE A WHOLE ACCOUNT JUST TO SAY THIS BUT THIS WAS A REALLY AMAZING NOVEL, I LOVE THE CHARACTERS AND THE STORY.. YOU GUYS REALLY DID AN AMAZING JOB <333 i know there wont be more content of them possibly but i really love haruto and akira so much theyre engraved in my head .. i wish to see more of them thats why i keep replaying,, SAFE TO SAY IM OBSESSED
aaa thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it! i'm sorry the story is on the shorter side, since it was made for a jam i didn't wanna make it too long in case i couldn't finish it haha ;;
i'm not sure if i'll write more w/ the characters or not, but i'm glad you enjoyed what there is! it's appreciated! <3
I loved this one! I love how cute it was, and me and chat are like literally yelling at bro to understand his feelings lol. Great game! Beautiful art too btw!
GHGHGHGHGH god Ebi I really do love how you write pining and yearning and this VN made me feel like I was going insane with heart-clenched swoony feelings. Akira is so ridiculously adorable and I just really enjoyed Haruto's voice and Tsundere Charms. Gnawing on them.
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Very good and interesting game, I hope there will be Spanish translations in the future.
If somebody volunteers to translate the VN I can add a TL, but if not then it won't happen. Translations are very expensive and I can't spend $1,000+ getting a free game translated.
SERIOUSLY. this is one of the cutest yet sappiest stories I have ever read asdskadhskjasadjdsdas. i legitimately got off my seat and started jumping around and whisper-screaming towards the end of the story and smiled so hard my mouth started hurting...
but anyways thanks to everyone who helped make this masterpiece, and ily haruto and akira <3
thank you that's very kind, i'm glad you enjoyed it! 😭🙏
saldrá en español? :( no soy hablante de inglés y el juego de ve super interesante
I really loved the story here!!!! And how Haruto's perspective was in the story. To have such a popular song out in the public turn out to be about you? It really fit both Haruto's and Akira's characters!! Not to mention, the dynamic that the two of them have is both so, so sweet, and super touching.
I really saw myself in Akira, and I'm so happy that they got their happily ever after. Also, I did take the time to read the notes - super interesting how the VN came to be, and the change in characters, too!
Thank you for making this; I hope we get to see more of them in the future!
thank u sm i'm glad you liked it! i am not sure if i will write more of these characters but i suppose i will see how i feel haha
THIS IS SO CUTE IM CRYINGGGGG I LOVE THEMMMMMMM, AMAZING VN BTW!!!!! I LOVE THE SOUNDTRACK TOO 💗💗💗💗
thank u i'm glad you enjoyed it! the soundtrack is rly nice, the composer did a great job 🙏
this game is amazing!
i love this so much. i cried a lot esp if i relate to one or both characters rlly rlly good i love the music and art
You really, really, REALLY, should post the soundtrack to Spotify!!!! This is def something I'd wanna listen to on repeat while studying or mourning some book I've just finished reading!!!!!
You would have to ask the composer about putting it on Spotify, but you can find the OST on YouTube here.
Damn,I kinda want the detail before they lie in the bed together--
i don't think i'll add more to this vn (and i want to keep it all ages) but maybe i can write a lil extra something and post it on ao3 i'll see how i feel
Oh,haha . I’m just kidding but that would be good if you consider it:)
ABSOLUTELY IN LOVEEEEE W THIS!!! i hope u can make sooo much more and may u have lots and lots of support n budget :3 !!!
thank you! i have written a bunch more bl vns, you can find them here.
Oh my god this was the best one ive ever read yet. I love the concept i love their personalities especialy haruto's. This was such a good game i thought it was a bit boring at the start but im happy i stayed for longer because with every part of the story i played trough it just got more and more interesting you did such a great job i really love it!
this is absolutely incredible
I really liked this novel!#!1!!1!1!1
Haruto and Akira are SO DAMN SO TENDER I'M CRYING. MY KIDS. I LOVE THEM. I LOVE THIS PIECE. Thank you very much😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 (Sorry if it's written incorrectly, I don't know English and I'm using a translator )
Finally got around to playing this, and loved it so much. I wanna complain about it being too short and wanting to see more, but it's so cute either way. I think you have another hit couple on your hands like Tavi and Yuel. Akira is so cute, and seeing him with tsundere Haru... It's perfectly adorable.
Absolutely loved 😭😭 Obsessed with the art and storyline but most importantly the soundtrack 👅👅 shit had me giggling biting my finger twirling my hair and kicking my feet when that one scene of Akira would show up while Intense Extance played in the background UGH
me when Akira showed up
no but seriously now i'm stuck listening to it on loop SOS
i LOVED every SECOND of this game!!
im so glad that i stumbled upon this! the story is soo good and the character look soo good!
como faz pra joga?
Estou bem ansiosa para começar a jogar seu jogo!! Por acaso ele esta completo? XD
it's a finished game, not a demo.
adorable
Thank you 🙏
this game needs more attention
I need it translated into Spanish. It looks promising.
i don't have the budget to translate a free game into different languages!
i will not use machine or ai translation in any of my projects.
I love you for that. Please never use ai or machine translations in your work, I respect that so much because I personally feel uncomfortable with the use of AI in projects.
You have instantly gained so much respect keep it up! I feel the same way about using ai in places that are meant to be creative it just takes away the passion from the work, never change :)
As someone who makes games too — respect. This is pure artistry.
oh my god this is adorable i love it sm
thank you i'm glad you liked it!
I want to see more games made by you but I can't view your profile due to Ofcom (I'm in the UK) D:
You can find all of my commercial VNs on Steam here, and all of my free VNs which aren't on Steam are here (though idk if you'll be able to view this since there's some r18 games mixed in).
Yes I can view it, tysm!!! :DDD
ya
this makes me missed the abandoned game, RockRobin
I found it hard to get into this novel at first, I thought "this guy has way too many inner thoughts." but over time, it became endearing more than anything. I adored this experience greatly, both Haruto and Akira are such well written characters, i found myself somewhat attatched to them even without proper backstories that capitalize on truama, which was new for me as im usually only an angst consumer lolol (i lowkey greived the story this could've been when i read the notes that were unlocked after finishing the game..but i still thoroughly enjoyed the fluff.) I was also very satisfied with how the story went about, especially the ending. I also haven't related so much to a fictional character in such a long time..Haruto the man that you are. Overall, this was an amazing play that will always haunt my narrative. Not only was the story a work of art, but the art style itself was extremely satisfying, not to mention the soundtrack..I wonder if it's on spotify? Nevertheless, thank you Ebi for this wonderful game!! i plan on playing every other free vn you have to offer <3.
i like writing 1st person narrators with a lot of inner thoughts, i think it's fun... it makes them feel more realistic to me haha, but idk maybe other people don't think about 1001 things all the time like me
i am an angst enjoyer too, but my most angsty bl vn is this commercial one here... it made my proofreader cry multiple times lol so that was fun
if you want a more dour bl story from me that's free you can maybe check this one out, it's a bit of a mix of gloom and hope which was meant to feel ever so slightly seedy... this is an r18 story though and it deals w/ some potentially uncomfy subjects.
and thank you very much!
absolutely amazing marketing, advertising a paid game as your most angsty one..now i cant rest until i've cried over it atleast once. omw to make a friend buy it for me. meanwhile, im eager to check out the second one! thank you for the links x3
Got up to the bar scene and decided to comment bc I actually screeched out of cuteness overload!!! The music and visuals and Haruto's humour are just unmatched...can't wait to finish it!
tysm! i hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
I think this is the second BL VN I played from you and I really loved this one too! I related so much to Haruto as someone who had childhood dreams but ended up giving up on myself and is now a corporate slave. I also love rock music and recently got into vkei bands like Plastic Tree. You really made his character have distinct voice with his own flaws and sarcastic personality. Since this is a music focused VN, the soundtrack was really good and fitting. I loved the character design for Akira sprite he matched the rock aesthetic to a T. Overall, this was a great read and I also appreciate reading your notes after the game and seeing the creative process of putting the narrative together.
really late reply but thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
i think the composer did a really great job on this project too, i love how the ost turned out!
OH HELL YEAH!!!
IT WAS A PREMIUM EXPERIENCE
I've laughed, i've cried
and i'm IN LOVE with this game and your characters!!
And most certainly i want to see more content about them in the future, because I'm sure this story won't let me go for a long time.
I really wish more people knew about this MASTERPIECE😭😭😭😭😭😭
I can tell it was thoughtful and difficult work, and I can definitely say that a lot of effort was put into it, because I didn't just read this story, I felt it with my heart and soul.
Thanks to everyone who made this game!!!♥️
tysm!!! i'm glad you enjoyed it!!!
coding the ui was Hell lol it took so long, but i'm glad it paid off !
I just adored this story so much! Haruto and Akira are so cute together. This was such a fun premise. Thank you for sharing < 3
im so late replying to these comments haha but thank you!!! i'm glad you liked it!
AHHHHHH this is so cute~!!!!! i know i'll be having brainworms abt this game when sleeping OTL
thank u very much! enjoy the worms hehe :)
I'm wondering. Is the music original? Like made just for the game...if not I'd love to listen to it, all of the songs, the one when your loading the game etc. They're just so good when I first heard it my jaw DROPPED DDD. It's just that good. And btw props to whoever thought of the character designs they're stunning!!!
the ost was made for this game! the composer uploaded the tracks to their youtube channel, you can find them here!
AHH IM OBSESSED
GUH I MADE A WHOLE ACCOUNT JUST TO SAY THIS BUT THIS WAS A REALLY AMAZING NOVEL, I LOVE THE CHARACTERS AND THE STORY.. YOU GUYS REALLY DID AN AMAZING JOB <333 i know there wont be more content of them possibly but i really love haruto and akira so much theyre engraved in my head .. i wish to see more of them thats why i keep replaying,, SAFE TO SAY IM OBSESSED
aaa thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it!
i'm sorry the story is on the shorter side, since it was made for a jam i didn't wanna make it too long in case i couldn't finish it haha ;;
i'm not sure if i'll write more w/ the characters or not, but i'm glad you enjoyed what there is! it's appreciated! <3
This game could bring a grown man to tears, its genuinely one of the sweetest visual novels ive ever played! loved every second <3
thank u very much! i'm glad you liked it! <3
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL OMG LIKE THE ART, STORYLINE, AND EVERYTHING !!!! anyways they're so cutie :33
thank u i'm glad u liked it!
Ashdbyeqw3iq ty for making this it is very cute :D
thank you for reading it! <3
THIS IS SO CUTE OMG
Haruto is surprisingly relatable lol i love this smmmmmmmm
thank you! i'm glad u liked it nd you found my boys relatable 🙏
GHGHGHGHGH god Ebi I really do love how you write pining and yearning and this VN made me feel like I was going insane with heart-clenched swoony feelings. Akira is so ridiculously adorable and I just really enjoyed Haruto's voice and Tsundere Charms. Gnawing on them.
i love tsundere boys i feel like theyre rly underrated haha
and thank u! i'm glad you liked it!