Is it Wrong to Want to be Locked Up, Toyed With, and Tortured By a Hot Guy?!
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android
Note: While this is a light-hearted story, the main character is a fan of yanderes, and all of their unhealthy behaviours. As such, some yandere traits are discussed (though briefly) in the story. The story also involves frequent coarse language, as the main character curses a lot in his internal narration.
Mamiya Hibiki is a regular guy with not so regular interests. He’s a huge fan of the decade-old drama series Possessive Boyfriends, and his favourite character by far is Kirisaki Shin: a deranged yandere who expresses his love with continuous threats of entrapment, torture, and murder.
Hibiki’s dull corporate job is a draining one, and to make his commutes to work less unbearable, he takes to listening to Shin’s dulcet tones on the train in the early hours of the morning. The highest form of self-care, for Hibiki, comes in the form of fantasising about Shin, his beloved, brutally murdering him…
But the real world soon encroaches on his harmless(?) fantasies, when a scuffle on the train results in his headphone jack coming unplugged from his phone.
In an instant, Shin’s murderous expressions of amour are broadcast to the rest of the train: including a smug older man Hibiki takes to calling ‘that bastard’, who finds the whole debacle incredibly amusing.
Hibiki might enjoy fictional characters threatening to kill him, but he’s far less receptive about real men teasing him about these desires.
That’s what Hibiki thinks, at least – until he runs into his silver-tongued tormentor yet again, and things start to get serious…
- 16k worth of text (approx 40-60 mins of reading)
- A kinetic story with no choices/branches
- Original character artwork
- Banter
- Hibiki's wet, see-through shirt
- A light, comedic romance story
Story/programming: ebi-hime
Character art: Ayanobro
Additional art: Renmiou
Background art: Minikle, Z
UI: Elduator
Music: Amachamusic, Music Material
Phone code: Nighten
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Development log
- I've released a few new BL VNs recently ☆May 11, 2023
- Android build addedApr 05, 2023
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The second hand embarrassment had me pausing for a minute or two😭
8/10!
oh to be a passenger in the same train as they are and be able to eavesdropI feel that Hibiki and I could be great friends irlৎ ˚⋅ 𝕯𝖔𝖑𝖑𝖎𝖊'𝖘 𝕽𝖊𝖛𝖎𝖊𝖜
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Cute game, wish it was longer!
this game is incredible! i absolutely loved hibiki's narrative voice, he had so much personality without coming off too antagonistic :)
Is this the full game? Thank you
yes
Thank you 💗
This actually changed my life I love this soso much it's so cute...! :3
Ahhh this game looks so gorgeous 8D I'm already excited hehe ...
It was so good that i ended up re-reading it more. I love every VN created and written by ebi-hime as always. I hope someday we can see more of them in the future.
yeah i think it is wrong
what is?
read the title of the game
It was rhetorical.
OH. MY. GOD. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is sooo well written and I had shivers all the time something with smug bastard (lololol) happened! Hnnng!
And the rain scene.........! QwQ jesus i see what you've done for other people......
Havent read it yet but i can relate with loving toxic traits in stories but being scared of them irl
GAHHH I LOVED THE STORY AND THE ART SMMMMM THIS GAME KIND OF!! REMINDS ME OF BEAUTIFUL STRANGER BY LAUFEY FOR SUM REASON.... BUT OVERALL IT WAS A PRETTY GOOD GAMEE
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Just wanna say I love your writing so much! It's hilarious, relatable and easy to read (which is important to me as I do have trouble concentrating)
THIS WAS SO GOOD I LOVE IT
THANK YOU I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT! <3
hahaha that was really cute :3 i loved it!!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Damnit, this is the first bl vn ever and now I want more >:(
But, I fr loved this, the characters are so well written and i swear I want a cute fluffy manhwa about what happens after. Also, the art looks so scrumptious and i wanna just devour it. I am so happy I found this and played it. Also, I kinda wanna know what the mls of Possesive Boyfriends look like, I'm too curious now.
Bit of a belated reply, but thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the characters! I had a lot of fun writing their banter too hehe >w<
The artists all did a great job, I think both the leads turned out very nice!
Tysm!
one of my first bl vns (in terms of playing) and this was exactly the type of dynamic that im looking for?!!! the title definitely had me thinking it was going to be a psychological bl at some point but it was fine that it didnt.. anyway its only been days since ive finished this but i cant move onn 😭😭
Ah that's very sweet, thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
And yeah the title is a bit misleading haha, it's very much a silly and goofy story where nothing bad happens!
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gah this was so cute and funny, I fell in love with this duo! Wish there was more ;-;
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 🙏
this was actually the second best yaoi game I've ever played, 1st being Vampliar. but still, AMAZING, I hope you can make more
Kokichi agrees :]
Aw, thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
I've written a few other free BL VNs if you poke around on my Itchio account!
爱来自瓷器😍
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I don't have any plans to write more about these characters at the moment, but you never know: it might happen...
La historia es muy bueno, y me a encantado, y me haria ilucion una secuela. Me gustaría sugerír una traducción al español .
Adorable! I really enjoyed reading this
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
bhegchchshdhagdv how do i rate this five stars I have never related more to a character in my life!! I'm in love with this duo and I wanna see what happens when they get to Kazuya's, or when he finally decudes to surprise Hibiki with Shin's lines...
aaa thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!
Well, now I'm wondering how Hibiki would react if Kazuya did use Shin's lines on him myself haha... 💦
I just finished this and oml I was screaming, it was so good!! 👏👏
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
theyre both so cute!! that ending was <3
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
its ok if its a hot person that lock you up but if its the person that is not your type yeah that gotta be wrong
Yes it's the wrongest thing
More.
I don't have any plans to write more with these particular characters at the moment, but I have written a few other BL VNs you could check out!
I just finished this, and it is incredible!!! The story is super engaging and the characters are perfect. I really wish there was MORE. I'll be over here praying for a sequel.
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it I had a lot of fun writing the dialogue hehe ;w;
I don't have any plans for a sequel at the moment, but it's not impossible. Maybe it will happen!
I love how realistic and relatable they are! It made the entire experience so much more swoon worthy. I can honestly say that this is one of my favorite visual novels. The earnestness and anticipation can be felt from every line, simple and yet so delightfully touching! I'm definitely looking forward to more of your work!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading about my silly children hehe >w<
I had a lot of fun writing their dialogue! It's one of my favourite things to write!
I've written a bunch of other stuff (some free, some commercial), so hopefully you find more that you like!
*very* casually hiding here while i d word from second hand embarrassment but i believe that it will get better!!1!111 OKAY THAT WASN'T THAT BAD ,, hibiki i feel u (we all do). can we talk about how FINEEEEE hyuga is OML that kiss scene . i am not ok they are so adorable and their banter OMLLL . 111111111/10 i love this so much!!!
aaa thank you very much! ;a;
I'm glad you enjoyed reading about my boys, even if the events did give you second hand embarrassment haha ;;
I think they're very cute too! Writing their dialogue was a lot of fun!
WTF DID I READ THAT RIGHT???? nah and I am more amazed that there IS people who like this shit... smh grow up people
I'm very sorry that you finally discovered that the world is full of people with tastes that differ from your own. This must be really difficult for you, but I'm sure you'll get through it! You can do it!
I put off playing this when i first saw it, but man do i regret not playing it sooner. This was funny, light, and fluffy. 100% a good playthrough on a bad day. The conversations are natural (as natural as an awkward train meet-cute can be) and have great flow. 10/10 would recommend.
Aaah thank you very much ;w;
I'm glad you enjoyed reading about my useless blorbos haha, it's appreciated!
i am OBSESSED i want to see more of these dumbasses
Thank you! I'm glad you liked them! <3
ngl when i saw the cover i thought it was an omori fangame
WHAT
after playing the game for a full 10 minutes i can confirm that it is in fact extremely gay and most definitely not straight yes your first thought about this game was correct it is extremely gay it is very not straight it is in fact possibly the gayest game i have ever played.
Obligatory "I say both 'ciao' and 'alas' (embarrassingly often)!!"
But that aside, this was really fun! The characters are delightful and I love their designs, their dynamic is quite well-done, and Hibiki's narration can be incredibly relatable, as well as incredibly funny.
I received quite a few comments from people saying that lmao
I didn't realise they were such commonly used words hahaha ;;;
And thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!