Hey I just finished this! Good job! It's a really great VN! Both endings were really powerful! I got goosebumps with Lilac's speech in the first ending! I did prefer the second one though. Skyler's a great character. Keep up the good work!
i didn't have the strength to look at the top choice ending ..i know pretty well how it goes
i am pretty much like Lilac in many ways , it's almost like looking at myself in a mirror
my childhood/teenager life has been so bad
i was always bullied at school..whether the bullies
bullied me with words or by hitting me or throwing stuff at me , teachers never cared about me seeing that ..the few time i did retaliate i was the one being wrong , even a few teachers been bad to me
i was the problem child pretty much like Lilac
counselling stuff was pointless too and they were not as nice as miss Khoury is to Lilac
i never thought about killing the bullies but countless time i thought about hurting them.
one of the time i did retaliate i rammed into one of them ..through a glass door..which could have hurt us both bad with glass shards but i didn't care about it.
life at home always been bad too.
there always were injustice against me and my brother, unlike him i did fought back against injustice for both of us which led me to being hit or strangled a lot
i love my brother a lot though not in a romantic way like Lilac
he has a good life unlike me , a wife and friends
there is not much time for me which annoys me ,
when i see him it's usually either with his wife or with his friends ,it's so rare when it is only me and him.
but well that's how adult life is.
characters art and backgrounds art is great too
the music goes well with it too i love it.
your visual novel is a masterpiece, you seem to grasp well how it is for people like Lilac
I feel a bit sad if you can relate to this story to such a degree, given it isn't particularly cheerful, but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless! Thank you very much for your kind words!
This is probably the third indie VN I've played and the second off itch.io. I really enjoyed the music, art and overall storytelling.
If I'm to be completely honest I felt one of the endings felt a little too... melodramatic for my taste but that did not really leave a bad taste after the wonderful, atmospheric story that led up to it.
I'm glad I read/played and am eagerly starting to check out the rest of the works. Thank you for the effort you put into your projects.
This is a bit of a late reply, but thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed reading Mermaid; your kind words are very much appreciated! <3
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Hey I just finished this! Good job! It's a really great VN! Both endings were really powerful! I got goosebumps with Lilac's speech in the first ending! I did prefer the second one though. Skyler's a great character. Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
I'm fond of Skyler too, she's so sweet to Lilac >_<
i didn't have the strength to look at the top choice ending ..i know pretty well how it goes
i am pretty much like Lilac in many ways , it's almost like looking at myself in a mirror
my childhood/teenager life has been so bad
i was always bullied at school..whether the bullies
bullied me with words or by hitting me or throwing stuff at me , teachers never cared about me seeing that ..the few time i did retaliate i was the one being wrong , even a few teachers been bad to me
i was the problem child pretty much like Lilac
counselling stuff was pointless too and they were not as nice as miss Khoury is to Lilac
i never thought about killing the bullies but countless time i thought about hurting them.
one of the time i did retaliate i rammed into one of them ..through a glass door..which could have hurt us both bad with glass shards but i didn't care about it.
life at home always been bad too.
there always were injustice against me and my brother, unlike him i did fought back against injustice for both of us which led me to being hit or strangled a lot
i love my brother a lot though not in a romantic way like Lilac
he has a good life unlike me , a wife and friends
there is not much time for me which annoys me ,
when i see him it's usually either with his wife or with his friends ,it's so rare when it is only me and him.
but well that's how adult life is.
characters art and backgrounds art is great too
the music goes well with it too i love it.
your visual novel is a masterpiece, you seem to grasp well how it is for people like Lilac
I feel a bit sad if you can relate to this story to such a degree, given it isn't particularly cheerful, but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless!
Thank you very much for your kind words!
i was not trying to make you sad i am sorry , i just had to say how much i can relate to that
anyway i shouldn't say more about it
i should probably check something light hearted !
Hello Taylor Hebert.
This is probably the third indie VN I've played and the second off itch.io. I really enjoyed the music, art and overall storytelling.
If I'm to be completely honest I felt one of the endings felt a little too... melodramatic for my taste but that did not really leave a bad taste after the wonderful, atmospheric story that led up to it.
I'm glad I read/played and am eagerly starting to check out the rest of the works. Thank you for the effort you put into your projects.
This is a bit of a late reply, but thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed reading Mermaid; your kind words are very much appreciated! <3
Hi! Does this come with a Steam key?
No, sorry.
Hi, I wanted to know if the Steam edition is censored in any way. Thank you!
The Steam and itch.io builds are exactly the same. There is no adult content in this VN to censor.