Very impressive work. I like how the narration shows the growth of Oliver's obsession with Mattie. I knew something bad was going to happen in the end, but the ending still shocked me.
this was an amazing story. it clearly portrayed a realistic perspective about the situation in the story. social status,wealth,etc. not all love stories are happy, some even dark like this one. I give it a 9/10. to me it just lacked a few visual illustrations which would give more impact to the story. i hope you don't take this criticism to harshly.
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If I cant have you, no one can. Fucking great writing!
Thank you for checking it out! I wrote this VN a few years ago so I don't 100% remember how it goes, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Interesting, might check...
Very impressive work. I like how the narration shows the growth of Oliver's obsession with Mattie. I knew something bad was going to happen in the end, but the ending still shocked me.
Mother. fucking. brilliant.
this was an amazing story. it clearly portrayed a realistic perspective about the situation in the story. social status,wealth,etc. not all love stories are happy, some even dark like this one. I give it a 9/10. to me it just lacked a few visual illustrations which would give more impact to the story. i hope you don't take this criticism to harshly.